bitemark
About
Your name is Cristine and you've been entangled with Carmen for years. Now that she's dating your brother, things between you get weird and you have to deal with much more than your escapist fantasy roleplaying could ever prepare you for.
Follow Cris in her coming of age journey that leads through a toxic codependent relationship, anonymous web chats and a lot of wondering if a girl can like a girl.
Information
- Linear visual novel.
- 1-1.5h runtime.
- Content warning: This story contains mature themes and strong language. It is intended strictly for adult audiences only.
- Important note: I don't really know how to code. If anything is clunky or buggy just know that I've tried my best.
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Themes include: codependency, gender, seeking pain, internalised homophobia.
This is our first completed project! Made for the Toxic Yuri VN Jam 2.
Comments
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navigating comphet through erp and then ur moms yelling for dinner. classic.
the writing was great and one random thing i really wanted to note on is that you used the side characters really well. even short moments with the other girls or the parents or brother were used to bring so much more personality and perspective for our two protagonists. the visual presentation rocked even if the ui and menu stuff was a bit broken as a result. i appreciate the effort into making the adjustments as the chatlog style presentation works perfectly for a story like this. i liked cris getting entangled in the web. navigating sexuality through online, but also with web i mean carmen trying to wrap cris up in hers
i hope youd include regural dowloadable builds as well. its just convenient to give options. also was there supposed to be music/sounds in the vn or not? cause despite the settings for it, it was just silent for me. if you need help with programming stuff, dont hesitate to ask for advice in the jam fluxer.
codependency and delicious messy relationships make for a really fucking good vn. really yummy ui and way of displaying sprites/backgrounds (gives me Who's Lila vibes). i wish you had pc / mac / linux builds as well as the html one so it would be easier for others to play, the options menu wouldnt close out and i had to figure out a way to fullscreen / undo / refresh the page a bunch.
still, that doesnt detract from the really twisted relationship thats crafted so well here. thank you for creating this, i really genuinely love it a lot <3
What a fucking game. just a tour de force of portraying that gnawing feeling of being left behind by what "normal" is. Messy and clingy and lurid and incredibly emblematic of its thematic imagery
...A cruel thing, that "enough" isn't enough for people like us, isn't it?
God this shit is so messy (compliment). Had a good time reading this. Looking forward to your future projects
Thank you so much for playing and for commenting. Messy is exactly what we were going for.